My comments aren't showing up for whatever reason, but anyways, here's mine now. @Emily: I think you have everything you need. Anything you add now is up to personal preference at this point. I'm curious as to how you solved the problem with the trees not showing up though.
I ended up making a new camera and I had to roll down the windows of the car (as they distorted the background) but in the end, it all worked. The camera should be one with aim and I wasn't using that before.
ReplyDeleteAndrew, your shot is looking much better. Here are some suggestions
- when he jumps off of the car, his right hand is kind of in a generic pose so I'd just flesh that out a bit so it's not so stiff.
- It looks like he's banging his head pretty hard against the top of the car as he's pushing it so I'd just calm the head down a bit so it's not contacting it that closely.
- Also, it looks like his left foot is sinking into the ground, so I'd look out for that.
- Lastly, his elbows are popping at the end so take a look at the graph editor and see if there's anything weird with it.
Good luck!
Andrew i think that your shot is looking a lot better, I think that you can speed up the timing on his fall though. And the head is really floppy... I understand that you want overlap, but maybe tone it down a bit becuase it looks like he's hitting his head against the car. The shoulders and elbows pop at the end, try and fix the elbow control and the clavicle to make them look proportional the whole way through.
ReplyDeleteI'd also offset the way that he pulls back his arms and starts forward before he pounds on the car the final time... just by a couple of frames. and i'd also push the cog out a bit more on the last post to match with mine a little bit better.
Keep it up andrew it's starting to really come along!
Just a quick thought, but try ruducing the amount of rocking on the car, I think it might look nicer or at least more convincing. cars are fairly hard to rock far. Overall your making good progress!
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