Hey Andrew,This is looking better. The shoulder still looks a little broken at the end, so I'd just try and fix that shape the best you can. Other than that, I'd just keep smoothing out the Graph Editor and see what other people have to say.
Hey andrewit's looking a lot better and i agree with emily. there is also another part that feels a little funny. The beginning... i don't know if this is youtube or what... but it looks like it's choppy in the beginning where demarcus is falling from the car. I'd try to smooth that out if you can. but other than that just keep up the refining.